Hemingway's Perfect Paragraph (A Farewell to Arms)
Hemingway in a Red Cross Ambulance (1918) A new edition of A Farewell to Arms (1919) has recently been published that contains a bunch of alternate endings and drafts of passages from the novel . Alas, I don't have a copy of it, but I have reason to get one, having just finished it and found it very moving a story. There was much I liked about the novel: the descriptions of the Italian countryside and the mountains, the lean dialogue, and the understated, sometimes corny but unsentimental romance between Lieutenant Frederic, an ambulance driver for the Italian army during WWI, and British nurse Catherine Barkley. I'd say that the moments that stand out in Hemingway's writing are those that you don't realize at the moment of reading—they're little points in time that you keep thinking about after you've turned to the next page and are still thinking about in the back of your mind. There was one paragraph, though, I had to share—it's a tender moment b...